Hey, WNRN.
As directed, we’re zeroing in on the geometric cardinal/waterfall/music bars design and reworking a few things given feedback and the deisgn to have work on a color shirt.
We’ve revised the trees so it no longer looks like there’s a hidden ‘41’ in there (we tried to make 29 work, but it just made the trees look odd; maybe for 30 next year).
Then you’ll see a side-by-side addressing the 3-vs-5 musical bar lines — we’re a house divded on that aspect of the design, so see what you think.
Finally, we’re editing colors based on what we think will work well in terms of not clashing and having good contrast to the stated possible Bella & Canvas shirt colors, mustard & kelly, and giving you some rough mock-ups of what those could look like in three colors and in one color, depending on which route you might want to go there.
Five Bar Lines vs Three
We’re split with regards to showing the musical bar lines more accurately, with five lines, vs the way we initially had it, with three. Going with five makes the overall design imprint area taller/longer and looks a little busier to us at times. But we don’t mind it if you all think the less accurate, more streamlined design with the three will bother people. We like the line thickness in each and wouldn’t want to make that thinner as it’d make the design less impactful in our minds.
Design mock-ups below are done with the three line version, but just let us know which shirt/design color combo is appealing to everyone and, if you think you’d prefer the five bar line design, we can show you that on whichever shirt with whichever colors you like.
Three Color vs One Color on Mustard Shirts
Here we’re showing you a three color design — navy, burgundy, and white — and a single color design on the Bella & Canvas 3001 unisex mustard shirts.
Three Color vs One Color on Kelly Shirts
And here we’re showing you another three color design — yellow, coral, and white — and a single color design on the Bella & Canvas 3001 unisex kelly shirts.
Think that’s it!
Again, let us know if anyone has any questions right off the bat or you all are thinking different shirt colors or anything.
Thanks and talk soon!